I read some stories in this week, but I choose this story because it was very exciting. This story about tow birds. These tow birds were frinds. The first time they met was when the first bird "Jon" was in a big problem. Jon was searched about food. Suddenly, the big falkon saw the Jon. Jon try to escape from the big falkon.
The second bird "Bieter" ate the food near the area where Jon battled with big falkon. Bieter heard the sound of the fighting. Bieter decided to see what's happened in thire, and he saw Jon battled with big falkon. Bieter decided to help this bird. Bieter went to call his friends. Befor big falkon killed Jon , Bieter arrived with his friends and help Jon. Jon thanked Bieter for his help. In the end, Bieter and Jon be the best friends.
Escape
Battle
Fighting
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ReplyDeleteThis is much better, but you need to pay more attention to spelling.